Story and Art by UmaYorokobi (DAS)

Another World

posted 23rd Jan 2012, 10:07 AM

Another World
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28th Aug 2010, 8:47 PM


First page. I'm telling from this point that my Eglish still not good and you might see gramar mistakes, sorry ^^U

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6th Aug 2014, 7:21 PM

Rockinblue1100 (Guest)

I really like this comic, it'd got a good story to it, please keep it up.

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30th Mar 2015, 4:15 AM

Sulik (Guest)

I really enjoyed reading your comic story. Im not surprised how good drawings u put in to it, cause I have seen your works on deviantart.

I must admit that reading yor comic and seeing an action I feelt like I was watching TV show which clearly means that you know well the Beyblade. You had to watch anime and read manga a couple of time, cause dialogues fits well to the characters.

If you make also screenwritting for your comic you should know that couple of your ideas are really great. For example comic situation when Clio enters the Beybalde world and she lands perfectly, when suddenly bag strikes at her and she falls on her face. You put in there many good ideas.

I was interested in reading your comic more than reading manga (I fortified it after chapter 3 i guesss).

Well, I have hope, that you also enjoy your work and you keep it up, cause that would be a shame if such great project would be ever suspended.

Good luck.

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29th Apr 2015, 4:16 PM

Mochi (Guest)

I really love reading the comics and drawings that you sketch! >.< Especially that there's barely any original Beyblade stuff now.

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